User talk:Rhi96/draftarticle

Hi Rhi96, Really enjoyed your article addition and think it adds quality information to the original on an important emerging area of family and social change. I very much encourage you to go ahead and insert it into the original article and formally publish it. There is only one suggestion I make: the reference for the sentence "There is consistent research that suggest children from single-parent families/households are more likely to experience feelings of unhappiness, engage in anti-social behaviour and suffer from mental-illness than children two-parent households."[14] is The Daily Mail, citing Civitas, which by my research suggests it is a British think-tank with conservative views on social issues (which also fits with the Daily Mail as generally a conservative newspaper). If you could find a better evidence base for this it would be great! Well done! JaneHaggis 04:29, 26 October 2019 (UTC)