User talk:Rhiannon38/sandbox 2

Spelling/Grammar
Exceeds Expectations I noticed no errors.

Language
Meets Expectations Well written.

Organization
Meets Expectations Could use some titles for different areas.

Coding
Exceeds Expectations plenty of good links.

Validity
Meets Expectations The information is valid to the Venice page.

Completion
Nearly Meets Expectations Still needs more work but I know you are doing that currently.

Relevance
Meets Expectations

Evaluation by (Gracelorelei (talk) 05:07, 6 December 2018 (UTC))
Spelling/Grammar Meets Expectations Spelling and grammer are well done

Language Meets Expectations I really like how clearly written it is! I just saw a few parts that I would change such as the first sentence "Venice is widely known for it's historic trade success and rich markets, and many factors helped Venice become a rich tourist spot today." I would change it to "Venice is widely known for it's historic trade success, rich markets, and the many factors that helped Venice become the rich tourist spot it is today." The sentence doesnt need the extra "and" but the rest is just a suggestion

Organization Exceeds Expectations Your edit is well organized and disected into different paragraphs and the photos you added were great additions.

Coding Meets Expectations, I am unsure if I did my coding right, but once I hyperlinked a word I continued to hyperlink the same word if I used it again in the paragraph so an example would be the word "Byzantium"

Validity Meets Expectations The information is all backed up and seems to come from reputable sources

Completion Meets Expectations You did wonderfully, and wrote alot and provided great photos, you were missing one citation to get to 20 sources but thats not a big deal at all

Relevance Meets Expectations The information is relevant to your topic, I like how you talked about current day Venice as well and tied the whole piece together

Sources Somewhat Meets Expectations you are missing just one source to complete the required 20, but if you find a quick source to add in there that would be an easy fix

Citations Somewhat Meets Expectations: You did great with citations and including them, but I would go back through and fix the date errors for your sources, additionally, I would go to the journals and input the URLs striaght from the journals rather than copy and pasting it from your browser because it creates an error and links to a PSU proxy server

References Meets Expectations, well done

Gracelorelei (talk) 05:07, 6 December 2018 (UTC)