User talk:Rhubb1

Requested move

 * The following discussion is an archived discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section. 

The result of the move request was: Page Not Moved  Ron h jones '(Talk) 00:31, 21 February 2010 (UTC)

User:Rhubb1 → Herbert W. McBride — Move new article from Myspace to Wikipedia. —Rhubb1 (talk) 16:36, 11 February 2010 (UTC) Hi there. You need to move the article from Myspace to your Wikipedia userspace first (create it at User:Rhubb1/Herbert W. McBride, then, when you're happy with it, add the template to the top of the article.  See WP:CREATE. Tevildo (talk) 10:50, 14 February 2010 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.

You need to add proper in-line references, sort out the external links, and sectioning before moving. You do not need to use WP:RM to move the article, you can do it yourself. You might want to consider asking at WP:RFC to gain further editors input and suggestions - or maybe use WP:AFC. I will add a useful template of links to help you with the various policies. If I had moved the page, it would soon have been tagged for speedily deletion.  Ron h jones (Talk) 00:31, 21 February 2010 (UTC)

Not quite ready
In my opinion, the article (here) is not quite ready to move into article space. I'll explain why, and remove the request to move this article into article space. Other editors may feel differently, so if you disagree with my reasons, feel free to replace the template, and someone else may move it for you.

It is important for Wikipedia articles to have references to reliable sources. While you have some items in the external links section, they do not qualify as references. As a guide to including references properly, please see Citing sources and footnotes. Please add some references in the correct form to support the factual claims in the draft article.-- SPhilbrick  T  16:48, 14 May 2010 (UTC)