User talk:RiaVora/Alt-tech

Hi RiaVora, good job on the article! I think the content added improved the overall quality of the article a lot. I saw that the original article consists of just a long lead section and is not organized or divided in any way. I think that adding sections of these specific examples makes the article more complete and neutral.The strengths of the new content added is that they go deeper into each different platform and is able to characterize each platform individually. There are lots of sources to back up the new content and it is well cited. One way I think you can improve you contribution even more is by expanding on the "Challenges" section. I think this is an important section to have and it seems like there is more that can be added. Also, if there is an example of an alt-tech platform from the left, I think adding that would help make the article seem more neutral. Hope this helps! Bryankjh (talk) 22:42, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi RiaVora, I did not see a Lead in your sandbox but I did like the additional subtopics that you created. You should consider typing in your sandbox the additional sentences that you want to add to the lead section on the actual article. One thing that you can improve upon is your word choice. There are many instances where you use words such as "most" or "far-right" in your examples and although it may be true, those words create a bias which should be replaced. I agree with that you have many sources contained within a very small place and it would be wise to either expand your subtopics or expand the challenges section. Take care! --VillusionV (talk) 04:00, 14 October 2020 (UTC)VillusionV

Every example was very well researched and described in a nonpartisan way. I think these sections will add a lot to the article in an easier way to read and understand. I was wondering about the formatting for Heotron and Volt and if you separated the paragraphs to continue to build on to them. I think some of them are small to stand alone such as the last sentence for Holt should be connected it all into one paragraph. I only saw one spelling error and it said of instead of off from the quote piss off Germany. Go23Bears