User talk:Rianna15/Gender gap in Pakistan/Sonalchuriwal Peer Review

The article is overall very comprehensive and holistic, touching on much more topics within the Gender Gap in Pakistan in a much more detailed fashion than before. The article’s main strength is its organization; it is very easy to follow by splitting the gender gap into three relevant headings, with subheadings where necessary. I would overall say the article reads as complete, but can be better developed in certain areas. For example, the article does not at all touch on intersectionality, and could discuss how the gender gap may differ across socioeconomic classes, religions, levels of political eliteness, etc. The article is also very number-centric, with a heavy focus on statistics. The article could be better developed by discussing the history of the gender gap in Pakistan, addressing how it has changed over time, and regional differences within the country, or explanations of how the gender gap materializes to psychological and physical harms against women. The article could also offer advice on what policy stances the government could take to address and reduce the gender gap, and compare the gender gap in Pakistan to other similar countries in the region.