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SAP S/4 Section on SAP SE article
Hi RiceCake88,

Thank you for starting the process of making the SAP S/4 section on SAP SE more neutral in tone. May I suggest that we reverse the order of the S/4 section with "Focus on Cloud"? That way, readers will get a chronological sense of how the product developed. In addition, I noticed one small typo in your edit. In the third sentence under the S/4 section, "customes" should be "customers." Thanks again for jumping in. Harper70 (talk) 19:06, 18 February 2016 (UTC)Harper70
 * Hey Harper70,


 * Good call on the chronology, I can see how that change would make the article flow better. I'll edit it today.--Ricecake88 (talk) 14:33, 22 March 2016 (UTC)