User talk:Rich wiki50300243/sandbox

The Lead
Your lead is a good start. Here are some suggestions: 1. no comma after "Texas" in the first sentence; 2. mention the year when the Colt first started playing; 3. in the last sentence, replace "zero" with "no." Once you make the revisions, you can post the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:23, 28 February 2016 (UTC)