User talk:Richy Tochihuitl/sandbox

Andrew Jung Peer Review: The information presented is well informed. Yet, need to proof read, there are some some grammar/punctuation errors that need to be fixed. You can cite/link major ogranization/topics to other articles to make your writing look more "official" and show where you got the information. May need less "analyzing" and more presenting information. Overall need to cite/link sources, especially with the amount of organizations/events stated in the writing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Andrewjung1 (talk • contribs) 21:38, 23 March 2018 (UTC)