User talk:Rick.james850/Sandbox

Feedback on your cybercrime draft
Hi Ben,

The article is taking on shape, although there is still some way to go. In my opinion, the section "Past attacks" is not particularly relevant for the topic and could be reduced to one sentence in the "Threats" section, where it could raise the question of whether or not policy intervention is warranted.

I noticed that your headings do not use title case throughout, please double-check to make consistent.

I am also not sure whether you want to keep the long list of CERTs. Maybe you could simply put a link to FIRST into the article and mention a few CERTs by way of example?

Looking forward to the next stages of development! --JMBauer (talk) 03:04, 26 April 2011 (UTC)