User talk:Rileyregular18/sandbox/Beau Geste hypothesis

Your proposed article looks promising! It was great that you gave some history to the concept as well as some relevant examples! I would suggest reviewing your grammar/sentence structure as some of your sentences didn't flow and had misplaced periods! Additionally, it could also be helpful to tag more Wikipedia pages in your work "i.e. tag territorial defense" and cite more appropriately! With that in mind, I think you have some potential to build this article out more!! Looks great!

-Lucas