User talk:Rileywynn31/sandbox

Peer Review
Peer review will go here

-I think adding a section on views of prostitution around the world is a really good idea so I'm glad you decided to write about that -when writing about numbers, I think you should do it numerically. i.e. replace "two hundred thousand" with "200,000". as well as change "11 percent" to"11%" -I would also go back and check grammar/sentence structure to try and make it sound more encyclopedic. particularly in the "Thailand: section -good job providing links to other articles in your paragraphs. more of this would be nice too. -any info on male sex workers like you mentioned in your goals section? -reading the current intro section on your article, I think you could possibly go in and re write parts of it to sound less biased and have more typical sentence structure to make it easier to read.Loaf1234567 (talk) 07:14, 11 December 2018 (UTC)