User talk:RinaNg

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Hello, RinaNg, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hi Rina. Start with a statement of how these things are important for puppies, rather than what they do generally. You can mention that later in the paragraph, but it shouldn't be the opening statement. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:49, 4 December 2017 (UTC)