User talk:Riniee

hi,

I am first time writer tried to write an article. I request all Wikipedians to help me out by telling me where i am lacking before i make it live. My article is http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Riniee/sandbox.

Thanks Riniee


 * Hi Riniee. Thank you for being conscientious enough to ask for feedback before making your article live (you can also gain feedback by submitting it via Articles for creation, just for future reference.


 * At present, there are two major issues with your submission. The first is the tone. Wikipedia articles should always be written from a neutral perspective, so anything that could be construed as "advertising-speak" should be avoided. Phrases like, "for creating and editing visually appealing images with stylish written text as a beautiful displaying graphic concept", "absolutely secure and easy" and "a great set of features for End users", to take but a few examples, are completely inappropriate. Remember, the goal is to create an encyclopedia article, not a product website or advert. The easiest way to do this is to ensure you only report what has been found in reliable sources, which leads us to the second big problem.


 * All content on Wikipedia must be verifiable; that is to say, it must be possible for readers to check that what we write here is correct. In addition, articles must be about notable subjects - someone else needs to have written about the Rich T-Shirt application before we can have an article on it. Although you have added sources, which is commendable, only the Smashing Magazine one meets our criteria for reliable sources (press releases, product listing and community generated sites like YouTube and Wikipedia itself are not considered reliable).


 * To fix the article up for inclusion in mainspace, you should do the following:
 * Identify reliable sources that talk about the application (newspapers and books are your best bet. Avoid blogs and any wiki sites). Include these in the article; see these instructions for how to do so.
 * Read through and take out or rephrase anything that sounds like it might promote the product. We are interested in knowing what it is and what it does, not how good it is and how well it does it. You should probably take out the entire section on Uses and features.
 * Consider copying the text to the Article Wizard, this will help ensure that your work complies with the appropriate policies and guidelines without you having to search all over for them.
 * Don't be discouraged! It's great that you've decided to write for Wikipedia, and I don't want to put you off with criticism. There's a lot to learn, and very few editors get it absolutely right first time. Stick at it, and you'll quickly become a veteran.


 * If you need any assistance, feel free to drop my a line on my talkpage here, or you can ask questions at the helpdesk. Happy editing! Yunshui 雲&zwj;水 13:56, 24 February 2012 (UTC)