User talk:RisingWorld

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nickatnyte (January 6)
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David. moreno 72   08:55, 6 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nickatnyte (January 6)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Heliosxeros was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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EROS message 13:26, 6 January 2018 (UTC)

Nickatnyte
You should refer to other biographies on Wikipedia. You could visit Manual of Style/Biographies to understand more. The first sentence, Actually, Nick is the real name of nickatnyte could be written as Nick, known as nickatnyte. Your sentence structures could be fine tuned. Moreover, it wouldn't be appropriate to write ''He is currently notable in YouTube. He is crazy Youtuber. He is very cool Youtuber who make video of lifwhacks and cames like Clash of clans, Clash Royale, Boom Beach etc.'' as this sounds very vague and it doesn't reflect standards of an encyclopaedia. The contact and goals section are irrelevant as contents on articles should have WP:Notability for them to be on Wikipedia. More activities within his career are suggested to be included instead of your personal opinion of him of being crazy or coo and etc. You must also include references to support your article. Your references have to be of quality, eg. a major newspaper or a high-quality and generally trusted mainstream publication; and Not their own website, press release, blogs, MySpace, Facebook, LinkedIn, YouTube, fansites, Twitter, wikis, or other sites with user-generated content. Visit WP:Verifiability and WP:PSTS for it will help you with your references. Cheers EROS message 13:57, 6 January 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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RISINGworld 00:12, 7 January 2018 (UTC)

Request on 02:12:13, 7 January 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by NepalMyMotherland
Nepallove you 02:12, 7 January 2018 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of UnovaRPG
Hello RisingWorld,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged UnovaRPG for deletion, because it seems to be inappropriate for a variety of reasons. For more details please see the notice on the article.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to work on it, you can [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:UnovaRPG&action=edit&section=new&preload=Template:Hangon_preload&preloadtitle=This+page+should+not+be+speedy+deleted+because...+ contest this deletion], but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions.

SamHolt6 (talk) 13:57, 7 January 2018 (UTC)

Db
RISINGworld 15:45, 7 January 2018 (UTC)