User talk:Ritadahi/Frente Indígena de Organizaciones Binacionales

'''1. First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that clearly described the subject?'''

Yes, the article does a very good job in the different organizations with abbreviations/full names, the date when they were started, and the location they were held in.

'''2. What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?'''

I think the draft was very good, I loved it. I would just suggest looking at maybe running the grammar threw Grammarly to get every punctuation and grammar correct.

3. What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?

I would suggest, that the Wiki advisor did say to break up big paragraphs into smaller chunks, maybe breaking up the first part into two paragraphs. Just based on what the advisor said.

4. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could apply to your article?

Yes! You guys gathered lots of articles that were reliable! Litzie01 (talk) 07:10, 1 December 2023 (UTC)