User talk:Riven1726/sandbox

Tia's peer review
The citations used all seem like reliable sources. The only advice I have is to check the spelling and grammar of the sentences and try to write a little more clear and concise. But, overall I think that it's a good addition to the article.

Dan's review
Riven, nice job finding lots of good sources to add detail to this section of this Wikipedia article. A few notes as you revise: That's really the push: A bit more polish in the language, and a bit more timeliness with the sources, and you'll have a useful contribution here. --Daniel.messier (talk) 13:56, 8 August 2019 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure how or why "copied from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/2015_FIFA_corruption_case" made it in there.
 * Tia made some good points about checking for spelling errors, as there are a few here (intol, mad, irganizations).
 * It's pretty rare to start a sentence with a numeral, so I might alter your sentence to say "In total, 41 arrests have been made ..."
 * You'll want to double check to make sure your information is all up to date. (Loretta Lynch is no longer the Attorney General, for instance, and since the source you're citing is from 2015, there have probably been further developments since then.