User talk:Riwatsubo/sandbox

Hello Ryu, I enjoyed reading your article about Driving in the United States. I like the topics you choose I just have a few comments to make before making my overall review. In paragraph 1) The Effects of Fuel Subsidy Reform, you spoke about how Indonesia utilizes subsidies on toll roads. Since your article is "Driving in the United States" you can relate how Indonesia's fuel reform subsidy is different or similar to that of the United States. Perhaps you can use fuel reform models that other countries have had influence in the United States. In you second paragraph "Meaning of Signs" it would be useful to show images of the signs to better convey the message. Lastly in paragraph three, "Environmental Impact of Driving vehicles" I like that you included a note of all the health risks associated to the pollutants given-off by the car. However, I would like to see a chart or map where these pollutants are more prevalent in the United States. For instance a visual of the difference between rural and large metropolitan areas. As of now it looks as if the entire United States is at serious risk.

Overall I enjoyed your wiki article it has a good structure and the topics you choose are a perfect addition to the wiki article. You have four sources that include books, articles and web pages and all the links work. Your content is neutral and non-bias which is key to making a good wiki article. You don't have images yet but the visual you select will enhance and add depth to your topics. Always keep in mind that you're writing about Driving in the United States and you want to make sure that the information is properly represented. Gomezgustavo (talk) 05:55, 8 May 2018 (UTC)