User talk:Rkjaouha/sandbox

Review
Hi Rkjauha,

First of all, I think you have done a good job with your draft so far. The introduction can be summarized a bit more, for example the introductary phrase, :"Currently nuclear fusion is not used to generate energy, instead we use nuclear fission which is the process in which we split an atom into two or more atoms. The reason nuclear fusion is not currently used to generate energy is because it has not yet been discovered how to maintain the reaction and not allow it to expand." can be more concise. I also like the background information that you have presented, but I would refrain from using the term "Impossible" since nuclear fusion is an on going field of study and new technologies and methods have been making strides in technology that might have been deemed impossible in the past.

I propose that you include information about hot fusion, cold fusion, and chain reaction in your introduction breifly. All in all, you have prepared well for this article. Hopefully, we can combine our drafts with the information about forms of nuclear fusion and the methods commonly used to perfom this fusion. While, my draft is talking about the methods of confinement, yours goes into detail about the reactions of hyderogen atoms. I think we should be able to combine and expaned upon both of these topics in this article, since they are related in their nature. I enjoyed reading your draft, again you have done a very good job with the assignement so far, Good luck! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sahmadncstate (talk • contribs)

Response
Hey Sahmadncstate, sorry it's taken me a while to respond although I haven't been able to work on this for a while. Thank you for the tips on what I can fix with my current draft, I do plan on reworking my lead and will take your considerations into mind while I do so. I also hope we can compare our work in the end and see what we want in the final draft of this article. --> — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rkjaouha (talk • contribs) —Preceding undated comment added 13:55, 20 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Sahmadncstate, when you create a talk page message, do not delete pre-existing messages. &mdash; RHaworth (talk · contribs) 12:47, 14 April 2018 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sahmadncstate, Jay0598, Rkjaouha, Henry.m.hobbs, Caseybelcher543.

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