User talk:Rlenehan/sandbox

Allen draft comments
Hiya. This is looking good! Just a few notes: I would probably keep the alma mater lines from the existing infobox; generally unless there's a good reason to remove information, it's best to leave what's there as long as it's accurate. Also, I would recommend updating the intro completely. Instead of listing her positions, I would focus on why she is important/notable, what her area of focus is in political science, what she is best known for contributing to her field, etc. I would move the stuff about her various work positions down into the main section — although I'll admit it's an awkward place to be in that she's about to switch jobs. Ideally when you write for Wikipedia you should consider this a long-view of a person's career rather than where they are currently, so writing in current position is optional here. We can discuss later :) Girona7 (talk) 21:03, 14 January 2015 (UTC)