User talk:Rlhopkins89/Taha Hameed

Critique
I think that your article is a good start. I think that you have some of the basic facts about this person but you need some more information in most of your categories. Also, I think that by having more information it will help to clean up your article. I think that your article is still in the beginning stages and it will be better once you have gathered some more information on this person.

You seem to have a great beginning to this project. However, I think that you are still in need of some more research so that your article is complete. I also noticed that you haven't removed some of the basic place-holder text. You are going to want to make sure that you remove that because otherwise your article might come across as confusing to the reader. You also might want to think about adjusting your infobox so that it only contains information you do have about your journalist. There are also a couple of spelling mistakes scattered throughout (an extra it before it's), but nothing devastating. Good luck! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Just the Facts Wasson Facts (talk • contribs) 03:55, 6 October 2011 (UTC) Just the Facts Wasson Facts (talk) 15:53, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

You have some content issues and so I put questions in your draft copy on the other page in parentheses. But here are the big issues to be resolved:

1. Work on the lead! // 2. Why is this journalist important? // 3. Cite a source or check your facts. Where are you getting your information? Fill in all those "citation needed" holes. // 4. Use inline citations. You did that with footnote no. 7 (currently).

Crtew (talk) 13:50, 27 October 2011 (UTC)