User talk:Rmcwhert04

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LaVannes C. Squires draft
You said in the IRC chat that you had created two drafts? Your contributions show only one, User:Rmcwhert04/sandbox, which has section headings. I couldn't find another. I've cleaned up your draft a little. Two comments: Firstly, for web sources you should add the URL; otherwise they'll be very hard to find. Secondly, at times the draft sounds rather promotional. For example, that the bank Squires led "still prides itself on the ideal to fill in the economic gaps that existed in the black community" doesn't belong in an encyclopedia article, especially not in one on Squires. Yours, Huon (talk) 21:15, 8 May 2013 (UTC)

User:Huon Thank you for your input. So, the contribution I submitted ha 4 sections headings? On the web sources, those were from a databases which my University has subscriptions to. I don't know how Wikipedia works with that. So my draft doesn't sound promotional could I make it past tense? Are there any other "promotional" sentences? Sincerely, Rmcwhert04 (talk) 21:42, 8 May 2013 (UTC)

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 LaVannes C. Squires, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! LionMans Account (talk) 00:17, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
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