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Article Evaluation: Benjamin of Tudela
All the information found within the article appears to be on topic and relevant. However, the formatting of the article itself distracts me. There is a huge blank space between the first and section second. Additionally, I find myself really confused by the fact that "early life" is a dedicated section, even though there is so little known about his early life that the section itself is one line. It seems too strange to give it an own section. The article does a great job of remaining neutral and objective. All of the citations that I explored worked. However, one cited source came from 1854. I wonder if this citation could be up dated or if it is still the most relevant. The biggest issue I find with this article is the fact that the first reference comes at the end of the first section, at the end of the third paragraph. There are external links throughout the first section but, it seems wrong that all the information laid out has no point of reference. This greatly lessens the reliability of the article.