User talk:Rms235

Communication Theory and Frameworks
I am currently working on the edits and updates to Cultivation Theory in my Sandbox. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rms235/sandbox

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Survey
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Cultivation theory page feedback
Rachel,

Like I mentioned in class last week, there are a lot of opportunities to improve linking to other wikipedia articles; here are a few that jumped out at me:


 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Superman
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ice_age
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Socialization
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Third-person_effect
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heuristic

but there are others as well.

I noticed a typo in the Background section: "small ber pervasive"

The Violence section could probably be moved to the Hypothesis section; also the Methods and Advantages and Disadvantages sections could be combined with the Hypothesis section as well.

I think Criticisms of Cultivation Theory should likely be a top level section, as should The Future of Cultivation Theory and Links to Other Research; additionally, Links to Other Research should probably go towards the end after The Future of Cultivation Theory.

Have you tried reaching out to the other student who was working on this page for feedback?

AlbinoFlea (talk) 19:43, 12 December 2011 (UTC)