User talk:Rmscott2019/sandbox

4/3 Assignment - Really nice work taking notes in your sandbox and getting trainings done on time! EKM2018 (talk) 18:14, 9 April 2018 (UTC) 4/7 Assignment - Looks like you've done your trainings but haven't done the actual assignment! (-2 points) If you get this done by tomorrow (4/10) I will restore your score! Also don't forget about extra credit opportunities! EKM2018 (talk) 18:14, 9 April 2018 (UTC) Great work Rachel! EKM2018 (talk) 04:40, 13 April 2018 (UTC) 4/10 Assignment - Looks like you need to do this assignment! Do ASAP for partial credit (-5 points) - get in touch for help brainstorming or if you have questions! EKM2018 (talk) 17:41, 17 April 2018 (UTC) -- Unfortunately, we need to have your topic be something marine geology/geophysics related. I would look back at the Week 3 assignment prompt for links to related potential stubs! (-3 points final score) EKM2018 (talk) 18:43, 18 April 2018 (UTC) 4/21 Assignment - You need to post your new topic, sources and the summary/facts from those sources. It will not only help us evaluate them but also help you form an outline for your topic. The sources will show you what is out there for an outline, as well as show you where you might need to focus your effort to find others. Depending on your topic you should also post to its talk page to get more feedback from others. You need to send me this via email ASAP to get any points even if you are having troubles on Wikipedia.(0 points) EKM2018 (talk) 04:59, 30 April 2018 (UTC) 4/28 Assignment - Start using your sandbox for drafting your article with a "lead" section as well as expansion of your outline based on the sources you already have. EKM2018 (talk) 04:59, 30 April 2018 (UTC) 5/3 Presentation Feedback - Nice to finally see what you've been working on! You have A LOT on your plate. I think you need to get things reduced and really focus in. This will help you define your sources as well. You kept using the phrases "longest mountain range" and "longest volcanic chain" - this isn't accurate. It is a spreading ridge. I would use "ridge" as your dominant descriptor. You could mention what other major boundaries it intersects along its length. Earthquakes and volcanism should be their own sections, not within tectonics (but I'm not sure you need to put either so you can focus on the other sections). I really like the features of interest section idea. I think alongside a parred down outline. Overall, you have A LOT of sections and it seems like too much. I would add more detail and thorough explanations to fewer sections. Please come talk to me and we can work on this! EKM2018 (talk) 20:57, 3 May 2018 (UTC)