User talk:Roangus

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Roangus, good luck, and have fun. -- Pam D  18:54, 8 April 2012 (UTC)

Uhwudong
Hallo and welcome to Wikipedia.

This article is a bit of a mess. I wonder where you got the style from? We have a lot of poor new biographical articles about Korean people and it looks as if you are all following some model or template which is producing a lot of problems. In particular:


 * Dates should not be linkes
 * The sentence "Uhwudong(어우동, 於宇同, ? - October 18 1480) and Uheulwudong(어을우동 ; 於乙宇同) was Korean Joseon Dynastys noble familys from dancer, writer, artist, poet." is very poor English
 * The sentence "first family name was Park." needs a capital letter at the start, and also "His ..."
 * "She from was noble family of Joseon Dynastys and married Yidong, prince Taegang(태강수 이동), he was great grandson of Joseon Taejong. but one day, she was divorced of adultery charge. after she was active poet, writer, artist, dansers." does not make it clear whether the person was male (he) or female (she).
 * You do not need stub as well as more specific stub templates
 * There is no indication why any of the "See also" are relevant
 * "site web" is not a standard section heading: it should probably be "External links".

Please learn more about Wikipedia before creating more articles. If you have difficulty writing in good English you might do better to edit Wikipedia in a language with which you are more familiar. Pam D  19:01, 8 April 2012 (UTC)