User talk:Robert McClenon/Olaf Koch

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Translation from the public wiki article "Olaf Koch (Manager)" available in German language >> https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olaf_Koch_(Manager) I have added 18 reliable sources to the article about Olaf Koch from independant publishers with significant coverage like Reuters, Bloomberg, Financial Times and European Supermarket Magazine, as well from NOAH conference. A previous English version of the article about Olaf Koch was extracted and redirected to the article about the company METRO AG, he is working for. In my POV that doesn't make sense.

The current article is in my sandbox: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:MarcosFernandezMETROAG/sandbox&redirect=no

I'm working for METRO AG and I pusblished this information transparent in my User page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MarcosFernandezMETROAG MarcosFernandezMETROAG (talk) 13:15, 4 September 2019 (UTC)

Reply 05-SEP-2019

 * To expedite your request, kindly state each specific change in the form of verbatim statements which can be added to the article (if approved) by the reviewer, including the exact location where the desired claims are to be placed. Exact, verbatim descriptions of any text to be removed should also be described. Finally, reasons should be provided for each change. An example edit request for how this is to be done is shown below:


 * Please remove the third sentence from the second paragraph of the Sun section:
 * "The Sun's diameter is estimated to be approximately 25 miles in length."


 * Please add the following claim as the third sentence of the second paragraph of the Sun section:
 * "The Sun's diameter is estimated to be approximately 864,337 miles in length."


 * Using as the reference:


 * Reason for change being made:
 * "The previously given diameter was incorrect."

Regards, Spintendo  11:49, 5 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Kindly open a new edit request at your earliest convenience when ready to proceed with the verbatim text and the placement locations.