User talk:Robert george lambert jr.

Welcome!
Hello, Robert george lambert jr., and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review

Hey Rob. After looking over your sandbox work so far, I think you have a really strong start. I looked at what you have in your user page/talk page and this is what I think. You're going to need a few more sources. While the ones that you have a good, you may need a few more. I also think that you may want to tag a few more pages overall. Link them to other wikipedia articles! Anything at all!! Your grammar is pretty solid so far. I also recommend watching your tone throughout. You want to remove any and all bias. There are a few sentences that suggest your opinion and it is crucial that these don't make the final cut. You also should look into a table of contents or separations through headings for your info. Let me know if this is helpful or if you need any specific help. Be sure you cite or quote all of your info. In a few spots I'm unsure where the information came from! DesireeLaPointeUG (talk) 05:10, 19 November 2017 (UTC)