User talk:Roccie/sandbox

Review of draft
Hi. I don't work on drafts much, so it would be a good idea to find someone who does. Here are some initial thoughts:

The article needs a great deal of Manual of Style work: formatting, organization, use of titles. Again, someone who works on drafts and new articles would be very helpful.

You should use consistent formatting for the references. Citing sources covers this. Author, title, publisher, and publication date are essential for other editors to be able to quickly review the article and spot areas for improvement.

I often turn to good articles to find example articles to work from. Good_articles/History has a section titled "Historians, chroniclers and history books" that may help.

I also look for Wikiprojects that apply to the article I'm working on. The directory is here: WikiProject_Council/Directory. Wikiprojects can have a variety of helpful resources. --Hipal/Ronz (talk) 01:24, 23 May 2020 (UTC)