User talk:RockerDudeX

Your recent edit to Water cycle (diff) was reverted by an automated bot that attempts to recognize and repair vandalism to Wikipedia articles. If the bot reverted a legitimate edit, please accept my humble creator's apologies – if you bring it to the attention of the bot's owner, we may be able to improve its behavior. Click here for frequently asked questions about the bot and this warning. // MartinBot 21:59, 22 April 2007 (UTC)

Your edits to Water Cycle
There was some great information in your edits! Thanks for helping improve Wikipedia. However, please avoid using personal pronouns and other phrases that indicate active speaking. It is more suitable to write an article in a matter-of-fact way, rather than explaining it directly to someone. Don't assume that someone reading an article is a moron, but also don't assume that they can follow every word. Add hyperlinks to your articles to improve their congruence.

Thanks!

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Regarding your edits to cloud
I reverted your edits to cloud because it did not meet the manual of style for Wikipedia. You should try to not write in first person view or as if you are speaking or teaching to someone. This is an encyclopedia and all text should be written in certain style as indicated by the manual of style. -- Hdt83 Chat 20:34, 20 May 2007 (UTC)