User talk:Rockinslick/What For? (album)

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

Albums are tough to write about on Wikipedia, but my general take right now is that you're making good progress on this article, so please keep working. Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next.

You may notice that a logo or other image was removed from your article -- this is due to a copyright violation. If you look in your history you'll see that another Wikipedian caught the problem and fixed it for you. Some images are only allowed to exist once on Wikipedia -- in the main article for the topic -- and can't be in your sandbox. Don't worry, we'll add it back when we help you make your changes live.

A key area to improve as you revise is maintaining a "Neutral Point of View" about this topic. You'll find more ideas in this Wikipedia policy: WP:NPOV.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 05:30, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Follow-up Review
Hi

This looks pretty good -- one thing to fix before go-live is to clean up the bits of the article that start to slide into "album review" territory:

"In What For?, Chaz presents his viewers with a sound that can be related to the likes of 70's rock music. Though he pursues this new sound for him, he is able to fuse it with some of roots to create a modern approach to the genre."

It's hard to write about music from a neutral point of view but this bit sticks out a little as opinionated.

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Note on article talk page.
 * 6) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 7) Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 00:53, 8 February 2022 (UTC)