User talk:RockyH

Your edits to threat model
Hello, I have seen that you have spent quite a bit of effort on the threat model article. Thank you for your contributions. However, note that what you have written is not written in an encyclopedic tone &mdash; it reads more like a "how to" than an informative overview, and it does not tie into the rest of the article (if you found the previous content incorrect or bad, be bold and fix it). Thus, I have currently tagged it with inappropriate tone.

For tips on editing articles, please see guide to writing better articles, guide to layout and manual of style. Also note that changes should only be signed ( ~ ) only on talk pages, and not Wikipedia articles theirselves. -- intgr 09:44, 1 December 2006 (UTC)

Attack Patterns
Please note that your article Attack Patterns looks like it is turning into a textbook or instruction manual, which would violate Wikipedia policy. Please review the contents, as well as the guidelines for writing articles. Thanks! Dudecon 05:05, 24 January 2007 (UTC)

Attack Patterns
Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia! We welcome and appreciate your contributions, such as Attack Patterns, but we regretfully cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from either web sites or printed material. This article appears to be a direct copy from http://www.rockyh.net/Posts/Post.aspx?postId=d658e693-1373-467d-94f1-968d9d1dfdc4, and therefore a copyright violation. The copyrighted text has been or will soon be deleted.

If you believe that the article is not a copyright violation, or if you have permission from the copyright holder to release the content freely under the GNU Free Documentation License (GFDL) then you should do one of the following:


 * If you have permission from the author leave a message explaining the details at Talk:Attack Patterns and send an email with the message to "permissions-en (at) wikimedia (dot) org". See Requesting copyright permission for instructions.
 * If a note on the original website states that re-use is permitted under the GFDL or released into the public domain leave a note at Talk:Attack Patterns with a link to where we can find that note;
 * If you own the copyright to the material: send an e-mail from an address associated with the original publication to permissions-en(at)wikimedia(dot)org or a postal message to the Wikimedia Foundation permitting re-use under the GFDL, and note that you have done so on Talk:Attack Patterns. Alternatively, you may create a note on your web page releasing the work under the GFDL and then leave a note at Talk:Attack Patterns with a link to the details.

It is also important that the text be modified to have an encyclopedic tone and that it follows Wikipedia article layout. For more information on Wikipedia's policies, see Wikipedia's policies and guidelines.

If you would like to begin working on a new version of the article you may do so at Talk:Attack Patterns/Temp. Leave a note at Talk:Attack Patterns saying you have done so and an administrator will move the new article into place once the issue is resolved. Thank you, and please feel welcome to continue contributing to Wikipedia. Happy editing! Eli Falk 06:39, 24 January 2007 (UTC)