User talk:RockySurfaces/Oak Ridges Moraine/Connorhs25 Peer Review

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Hi,

Thanks for reviewing the additions I have suggested for the Oak Ridges Moraine article. For this project, my main focus was to add in a geology section to the main page, but it would also be beneficial to the public to add content to other sections as well, as you pointed out. If you had ideas in mind about expanding "Physiography", "Ecology" or "Development Pressure" I would be happy to receive and implement them. Your point about many millions of people living in this region is valid, and should be added to for better coverage of the topic.

Going forward, I will try to gather more information from each source about geology, but there is only so much one can say before repeating endlessly what others have said in their research. There should be more claims coming from the sourced material than just a few odd sentences.

I do not plan to add images into the article, but if necessary to get a point across, then they will be considered.

RockySurfaces (talk) 17:13, 9 March 2023 (UTC)