User talk:Rollie the Lynx

Your submission at Articles for creation: Proton-Electrotex (September 26)
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 Onel 5969  TT me 03:49, 26 September 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for your review! What edits would you propose? I'm thinking deleting Products and Sales Geography sections, anything else? Rollie the Lynx (talk) 06:04, 26 September 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi. Basically the only thing which is of encyclopedic content is the History section. The certification section also needs to go. The publications section is problematic, the way it is written right now it makes it look like this company publishes those magazines, but I'm not sure. Particularly since some of them are in Russian. If the company does publish those magazines, then that is something which can be developed. If this is simply a list of magazines in which the company has been mentioned, either use them as citations, and include the info in the body of the article, or lose them. Hope this helps.  Onel 5969  TT me 11:52, 26 September 2017 (UTC)

Okay, done. No, the periodicals are not run by the company, they are gone now. Do I resubmit the page for review now? Rollie the Lynx (talk) 07:10, 27 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Yes, simply resubmit. Let me know.  Onel 5969  TT me 12:16, 27 September 2017 (UTC)

Done. Thanks for your help! Rollie the Lynx (talk) 13:16, 27 September 2017 (UTC)

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