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Article Evaluation of LGBT history in Israel -no citation for the Turkish abolition of sodomy laws -no citations for the second paragraph about Ashkenazi Russian migrants; this whole statement seems like a speculation without much support (so maybe it isn't relevant?)

-no citations for the "buggery" laws of the UK or the continuation of those rules in the new state of Israel in 1948 -no citation for the 1963 ruling and the citation for the 1988 ruling doesn't seem to actually include that information (Check the timeline again, because it wasn't working)

-no citations for all of 1990s events -very few citations for the 21st century also

-the divisions of family and marriage activity isn't necessary as divisions in the history since most of the history of LGBT people in Israel is that

-line about Schlissel is under the 2000s instead of under the 2010s -no information past 2015

-more current events should be added and earlier parts should be flushed out where possible

-it seems to be unbiased and neutral -should try and find more legal documents rather than using too many news articles -should add more images and visuals -only activity on talk page is from a bot referring to the links? -part of WikiProjects of LGBT Studies, Israel, and is rated as a Start-class page 15:13, 21 September 2018 (UTC)Romeoper (talk)