User talk:Ron Whitney

Barter
Hello--I'm a bit concerned that your update to Barter reads like an advertisement. I think it needs toning-down and it definitely needs references which aren't barter-advocacy organizations. I'm also not comfortable saying that the third-party barter organizations are now more important than traditional barter. There's good stuff there, but it needs cleanup. Cretog8 (talk) 17:22, 18 July 2008 (UTC)