User talk:Rona1964/Biblionef

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I made these edits, partly formatting, MoSand copyediting, but mostly removing the blatant and sometimes first-person spamming. Please do not restore the promotional text.

The article needs more wikilinks. I've added a couple, braille and Cape Town, but there is plenty of scope for more.

In places, the text seems a close paraphrase of copyrighted sources, some rewording might help

Jimfbleak - talk to me?  12:10, 14 July 2014 (UTC)