User talk:Ronald Peralta/sandbox

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The critical reception for Journey have been tremendously positive. The New York Times says "Though Becker has plenty of experience as an artist for films, “Journey” is his first book, and it’s a masterwork". Publishers Weekly describes the illustrations as "Wonder mixes with longing as the myriad possibilities offered by Becker’s stunning settings dwarf what actually happens in the story. Readers will be both dazzled and spurred on imagined travels of their own". Seira Wilson of Amazon.com Review says "Journey is an incredible work of storytelling through art that will appeal to readers of all ages".

The critical reception for Journey have been tremendously positive. The New York Times says "Though Becker has plenty of experience as an artist for films, “Journey” is his first book, and it’s a masterwork". Publishers Weekly describes the illustrations as "Wonder mixes with longing as the myriad possibilities offered by Becker’s stunning settings dwarf what actually happens in the story. Readers will be both dazzled and spurred on imagined travels of their own". Seira Wilson of Amazon.com Review says "Journey is an incredible work of storytelling through art that will appeal to readers of all ages".

Maybe you want to space these out and maybe only use review's form a credit sourceKatiea32 (talk) 18:34, 12 April 2016 (UTC)

Suggestion
Hey. Just wanted to suggest that you can word the following sentence differently.

"Blackout is a children's book by author and illustrator John Rocco".

Suggestion "Blackout is a children's book written and illustrated by John Rocco".

Best, Unified101Unified101 (talk) 19:29, 7 May 2016 (UTC)