User talk:Ronark/Archive 2

On the American Mastiff page you stated "The current version of this article or section is written in an informal style and with a personally invested tone. It reads more like a story than an encyclopedia entry."

Can you please be more specific? Is there a certain area? Any guidence would be apprecieated.

Thank you,Daredreamer (talk) 21:29, 26 November 2008 (UTC)