User talk:Roohimohamed

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Welcome to Wikipedia, Roohimohamed! Thank you for your contributions. I am Trafford09 and have been editing Wikipedia for quite some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Questions or type at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes ( ~ ); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Trafford09 (talk) 22:18, 27 August 2011 (UTC)
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August 2011
Your addition to Imran Khan (singer) has been removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without permission from the copyright holder. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other websites or printed material; such additions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of article content such as sentences or images. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. Much of the text was copy-pasted from http://www.imrankhanworld.com/site.php#3. Muhandes (talk) 23:35, 27 August 2011 (UTC)

Welcome to Wikipedia. Everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia. However, please do not add promotional material to articles or other Wikipedia pages. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. Sentences like "Imran Khan’s rise has seen him become a household name amongst the Asian population all over the world" are promotional, and are not acceptable. Muhandes (talk) 23:38, 27 August 2011 (UTC)

I have reviewed the other contributions you've made, and while I believe they are done in good faith, this is just unacceptable. You add material without proper sourcing, or even worse, add a source which does not verify any of the facts. You add promotional material, original research and fancruft. You introduce multiple violations of numerous guidelines and policies like WP:EL, WP:CAT and more. I had no choice but to revert the material. If you want to continue to contribute you will have to learn how to do so constructively. I suggest you start with small, properly sourced contributions. I am willing to monitor your edits and assist. Best regards, and happy editing. --Muhandes (talk) 00:10, 28 August 2011 (UTC)

Addendum: I noticed you are editing the same pages edited by User:Lightenterprise and User:RehanHaider2011. Are you in any way related to them? Best regards. --Muhandes (talk) 00:11, 28 August 2011 (UTC)

Hi Muhandes, its true i took a example from his website, cause i noticed that his current page is way outdated. ive tried to keep it original and clear to the readers. i didnt meant to add promotional information. as these are my first edits. and while doing that page, i thought i was finished but came across the desi sites which relate imran khan with kamal raja. therefor i took interest in kamal raja to and start to add changes. as im new i dont know if i had to reply over here. and would be glad if you could assist me by adding content. what i didnt understand, is that ive added alot of content written and sourced by myself from several websites. why are those deleted. the only content i took as example was the early life and music career. Roohi Mohamed (talk) 02:02, 28 August 2011 (UTC)

I see that you removed the amplifier page. Same goes for this one. Ive added all material myself and put reliable sources and citing. why did you remove that one? Roohi Mohamed (talk) 02:04, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Answering here is proper - see WP:TALKPAGE. The reason I had to revert your edits was that a large part of it was unacceptable. I repeat that I assume good faith, i.e. I assume you mean well, and are just a new editor. But large parts of the text are copyright violations and cannot be accepted. Have a look at this version, which is the way you left the article. The entire section "2005-06: Career beginning" is taken from http://www.imrankhanworld.com/site.php#3 verbatim, and so is quite a bit of the material. Even if you had permission to use it, the material is promotional (as one would expect from the artist's own page). Stick to neutral facts which can be reliably sourced, preferably by secondary sources. As for amplifier (song), it was redirected to the artist's page. The reason was clearly given with the edit itself - WP:NSONG is the policy about notability of song articles, and the article very clearly doesn't satisfy it. If you think it does follow this policy, explain in the article's talk page why you think so and revert the edit, and we can continue that specific discussion there. --Muhandes (talk) 06:58, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Just an additional thought. Aplitting the sections to "Early life" and "Music career" is a good idea in essence, but is only applicable when one has enough material for two sections. Right now there is only one section about early life, so I don't think it would be appropriate. Anyway, I'm willing to assist with any idea you have. Best regards and happy editing. --Muhandes (talk) 07:09, 28 August 2011 (UTC)