User talk:Rosaamoore/Blue Moon Tavern

Draft
It's good to see the model page here and a bit of drafting. It looks like you've got everything you need to dig in and get a draft going. ProfHanley (talk) 17:31, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Peer Review
Just added a review of your draft looks pretty good, also you don't have to use my suggestions DeLandNebbb (talk) 20:23, 27 October 2023 (UTC)

Draft II
This is looking much better. A couple of things before sprucing up and publishing: some of the sentences are confusing - - I italicized areas where you need to do some sentence-level revision; cite sources inline - - i.e. in the text via footnotes (use the "cite" button in the visual editor). ProfHanley (talk) 17:16, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Draft III
Okay. . slowly taking shape here. I think you need to organize things a bit more clearly and be sure to cite sources inline. ProfHanley (talk) 17:21, 14 November 2023 (UTC)