User talk:Ross27pdx/sandbox

=Evaluations=
 * Points: 3
 * Grade: B

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Meets Expectations Spelling and grammar seem well executed.

Language
Meets Expectations Could add in some stronger words and also the order of words is a little jumbled sometimes, so maybe you could read it aloud to help with language.

Organization
Meets Expectations Transition from the history of Joan of Arc to the thought about the Joan of Arc trail and how its an easy day trip is a little rough.

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Completion
Nearly Meets Expectations It needs a little more history on Joan of Arc. She wasn't executed merely for dressing in men's clothes, it would help provide context for why she was important enough to make it into the history books.

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Meets Expectations I would strike "the" in "the legendary French woman Joan of Arc". Maybe consider reworking the 3rd sentence in the first paragraph. Something like, "In Place du Vieux Marche, where Joan was found guilty, the Church of St. Joan of Arc now stands. A large cross and garden memorialized in (is their a certain year this happened?) draw large numbers of visitors every year." When you said "Since it's construction in 1979" I'm confused about what you are referring to...the church or the garden memorial.

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Organization
Meets Expectations I like the way you have this structured, Anna. Could you develop info on Joan of Arc's trail?

Coding
Good

Validity
Good Good/Needs improving/Clarification. (See Citations)

Completion
Good

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Meets Expectations There should be a comma in your first sentence after woman to introduce Joan of Arc. "Rouen is the location of the trial and execution of the legendary French woman, Joan of Arc."

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Organization
Exceeds Standard

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Meets Standard

Validity
Nearly Meets Standard Needs more citations. Citations should be incorporated into the content instead of at the end. This clarifies what parts of your content are being cited.

Completion
Nearly Meets Standard I think your article could include a bit more content. I think expanding on the tourist aspect of The Church of St. Joan of Arc would be good. Maybe talk about how many tourists visit each year and expand on what the Joan of Arc trail is.

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11/7/2018 Evaluation by User:Meganly
Grade: C/D

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Expectations I saw no spelling issues.

Language
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Organization
Meets Expectations I would insert Belfast into the first sentence, so that you are clear about the city you are talking about...perhaps that is not necessary, though. I might rework the second and third sentence so that Potatoes and bread are towards the front end of the sentence. Consider, "Potatoes and bread are staples in Belfast, along with a good assortment of seafood and root vegetables. Historically food needed to be hearty and able to keep you full for awhile (maybe explain more, why?)."

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Good

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Good

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Needs work Anna, I worry that you don't have enough information here to get a solid grade. You have many great aspects of the cuisine to expound on. Some ideas for expanding this entry might be with explaining why potatoes and bread are staples- what vegetation grows in that region? Historically how was food kept in Belfast and does this contribute to those staples? Are there any recipes or famous chefs from this city? Why are chefs now combining exotic flavors- does this have to do with migration to the region? The historical pub crawls sounds like a fun rabbit hole to go down. What is the history behind those pub crawls in Belfast... or popular pubs in the area? Hope this helps...

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Good