User talk:Rossdanielbarrie

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Ross Peer Review

 * Overall amazing start, good focus on relevant statistical data
 * Possibly include a stronger lead with more sources cited throughout
 * One of the best articles in the class, top-notch
 * Look into urban/rural disparities in water availability

Peer Review Response
Thanks for the review. I will definitely try to improve my opening sentence and look further into water disparities.