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Article Evaluation
For the section “Nations permitting DTC” There are a few places where the wording is a little confusing, for example, I would make the sentence comparing the 1969 regulations to 1997 regulations a bit more clear, as well as add some detail to what the 1969 regulations actually were.

I think that the section you want to add about Types of Pharmaceutical Advertising needs to have more information. In comparison with other sections it seems a bit overlooked. You’ve got the definitions, which is great, but I would add more descriptors about what is most common, pros and cons, and what the actual FDA imposed regulations are on each of them.

The statistics in the controversy section are great for showing this side of the argument. Good data. I haven’t actually looked at this section in the article you’re actually adding to, but I’m assuming it’s leveling the article and making it less biased, which it great if this data isn’t fairly covered int he existing section.

The last section I thought was really well put together with the research and effects of advertisements. Good job! Please ask me if you have any questions Greenough.h (talk) 22:47, 3 August 2017 (UTC)