User talk:Rpatungan

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Peer Review for AIDS Article
Peer review of Slava Mogutin edits:

The added information seems relevant, but the wording is a bit confusing - specifically "Lost Boys is credited to his return". I'm can guess at what the sentence means, but you might be able to reword it to make it easier to read. The edits appear to be neutral, though it could possibly be seen as one-sided with the verbiage "Lost Boys is credited...". However, no heavy biases evident. The edits are pretty neutral, so no over- or underrepresented viewpoints. The "Red Scare" reference looks to be duplicated (1 and 4 are the same). Additions are properly cited from "Red Scare". Could add more under "Contemporary Exhibitions" if there were new exhibits since 2014, but otherwise, information seems to be up to date. Mtong14 (talk) 00:42, 11 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?


 * Thank you for the feedback! I went ahead and made the suggested revisions to what I wrote on Slava Mogutin's page and fixed any links that were not working.
 * Rpatungan (talk) 03:40, 18 November 2017 (UTC)