User talk:Rpsenka/Pelican eel

Article 3
It was noted to me in a peer review that citation #3 does not seem to go access a link. This is true. This citation either needs to be amended or it and its information need to be deleted. Rpsenka (talk) 12:35, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

Description
(The sentence "When it feeds on prey, water that is ingested is expelled via the gills." can be omitted here because it is repeated in the part about diets)

(The sentence "the specimens that have been brought to the surface..." does not add any helpful information I think)

(I moved the information about the lateral line from the part on the whiplike tail to the part about the pelican eel being different in appearance)

(make the section about eyes different paragraph -- talk about placement and size of eyes. Consider omitting the section about "unlike many other deep sea creatures)

(Add information about how much the jaw can open/ how big it is compared to the rest of the body), (article about the aglomerular kidney - more info here)

(at the start of the paragraph about the pelican eel size, say its size comparison to other eels, and move this to the top of the section)

(description about the black, olive, and thin white stripe needs a citation)Rpsenka (talk) 15:15, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

Intro
(The sentence "rarely seen by humans" can be omitted here because it is repeated in the part about the human interactions).Rpsenka (talk) 15:17, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

Wiki Article
All edits were transferred to the live article from the sandbox. Some edits were amended during the transfer, some were omitted, and many were transferred without further changes.Rpsenka (talk) 05:55, 11 April 2022 (UTC)