User talk:Rpwilso

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Edit request on 3 August 2012
Small changes requested to "Canada", but I feel important, nonetheless: Under the heading "Early 20th Century", it is ambiguous what the "CCF" is and what "Saskatchewan" is the the reader without searching other portions of the page, or other pages, when it is easy to reword the affected sentences as follows: In response to the downturn, the ruling political party of the day in the province of Saskatchewan, the Co-operative Commonwealth Federation (CCF), introduced many elements of a welfare state (as pioneered by Premier Tommy Douglas) in the 1940s and 1950s.

Under the heading "Modern Times", it is unclear if Nunavut were created from thin air, or how it came about. A simple addition would be to reword the sentence in this way: "In 1999, one of Canada's two existing territories, The Northwest Territories, was broken apart, to form a third called Nunavut, after a series of negotiations with the federal government."

At the same time, Quebec underwent profound social and economic changes through the Quiet Revolution of the 1960s, giving birth to a modern nationalist movement. The radical Front de libération du Québec (FLQ) ignited the October Crisis in 1970,[68] and the sovereignist Parti Québécois was elected provincially in 1976, organizing an unsuccessful referendum on sovereignty-association in 1980. Attempts to accommodate Quebec nationalism constitutionally through the Meech Lake Accord failed in 1990.[69] This led to the formation of the federal political party the Bloc Québécois in Quebec and the invigoration of the Reform Party of Canada in the West.

Rpwilso (talk) 11:30, 3 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Regarding your request: Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: this is the talk page for communicating with the user . Please make your request at the talk page for the article concerned. This is probably Talk:Canada. -- Red rose64 (talk) 12:01, 3 August 2012 (UTC)