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Telepresence-enabled cognitive apprenticeship model of teacher professional development
Where did you get the text for Telepresence-enabled cognitive apprenticeship model of teacher professional development from? It's not looking terribly encyclopedic to me. --Tagishsimon (talk) 02:37, 17 February 2007 (UTC)

It's from my research. I'm an educational researcher working on telepresence in teacher professional development. In addition to having a nice summary of the academic literature in the area, my article synthesizes it and presents an emerging model, which is the title of the article. Sorry if this reply is in the wrong place... —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Tagishsimon (talk • contribs).

I am the author of all of the content on therenow.net


 * You might want to check out No original research. I have concerns about the very long title - can it be shortened? but by all means go ahead and continue. My first concern was that you'd ripped the content from somewhere. As it is your own, it's fine. You might also want to check out Footnotes. --Tagishsimon (talk)

Thanks for clarifying. This research (although not this exact text) has been published as the doctoral dissertation of me - Dr. R. Shawn Edmondson. The title is Evaluating the Telepresence-enabled cognitive apprenticeship model of teacher professional development. Published at Utah State University (2006) Thanks for the footnote tip.

--rsedmo (talk)

How can I shorten the title?? Do I use the "move" feature?--rsedmo (talk)

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Telepresence-enabled cognitive apprenticeship model of teacher professional development
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