User talk:Rsg1magic/sandbox

Magda's peer-review—

The lead is much clearer than previously but maybe doesnt need the point about Shaw. Maybe just write "12 albums" rather than "a total of"

Could the sentence on influences be separated into a section on musical style? Can you write more about her musical style ? This could be referenced from music books/articles... Could you also break up the career section into decades or something that makes sense, especially the part when she leaves the industry as an artist but does the business side? Overall, this is very clear and has a strong flow but I want to know more!