User talk:Rsp53

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Peer Review
Hi there! Your page has some basic foundation to expand and build on. I think you can add an "Overview" section for the theory summarizing what's the theory is about before discussing "Applications." Also, you can point out to the "goal" of the theory in the summary. You can connect "The three classical persuasion model" with the specific page through a hyperlink. I think you need to provide the abbreviation (TRA) in the beginning so the reader can understand what this abbreviation related to in the bottom sections. You have jargons like "college fraternity hazing" and "coupon usage" which need to be explained. The "Formula" and "Process" sections are not clear. Maybe you can add some examples to understand the formula and process better? I think there is no need for the "Theory revision" section as it is mentioned in the "see also". Maybe you can substitute this page with more applications for the theory in cross-cultural communication? Hope this helps! Fna8 (talk) 22:34, 9 November 2015 (UTC)