User talk:Rsrour/sandbox

Solid lead paragraph with good information and an overview of the article. Make sure to reinsert citations for abortion statistics under "number of abortions" and with the public opinion section. Very good minor edits that will make the article sound more academic and be well-rounded. The second sentence in the last paragraph is a little chunky in the way it reads, a little bit with the third sentence in the paragraph but not as much. I like the inclusion of today's news (COVID) in your topic and it is executed very well. Good job on staying neutral in your writing and good job overall. Kenidevlin (talk) 18:02, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Yeah I noticed the citations were not copying over when I was pulling paragraphs from the page so I am going to be extra careful when I am reinserting the information. I fixed the sentence you mentioned and realized it was not proof read :(. I made it more readable and got rid of the chunkiness.

Rsrour (talk) 18:19, 19 April 2020 (UTC)